Adam,
some good work posted here with a successful video and production process. Good work.
The pre-production work completed could have been more thorough and there are elements missing You did contribute to the group work which was evenly shared out in the group. (P3)
You followed you planning work closely and you did make changes which are documented in some form on your storyboards. The video is recognisable from the planning. (M2)
The discussion (essay) on the pre-production process is a good piece of writing which outlines the requirements and sources of requirements for a media production. (P1) Try to ensure that for future written work, sections are clearly labelled and heading are used.
Some good work here on which you can build on.
Carl.
